"Good night, sleep tight, don't let the be bugs bite." My gram said to me as she kissed my forehead and sent met to bed. As I walked into my bedroom and got into my pajamas, I thought about bed bugs crawling all over me and biting me while I slept. After spraying my entire body with bug spray, I snuck into my bed as to not wake or disturb the bed bugs already sleeping under my blankets. Finally laying down in my bed, I slowly slid my petrified body under my blankets along with the bed bugs. All night I itched and thought about the bed bugs in my bed with me. I cried all night and in the morning I checked my legs, arms, and belly for little bites from the bed bugs.
I like this story Mariah because it is different from your other writings. It was like totally different and creepy. I liked how weird it was :) I wonder what'll happen to the girl and I wish this story was going on more!
ReplyDeleteI thought your story was cute, it reminded me of a little kid that was over thinking what her gram said. I wonder if you meant for it to sound like a little kid. I wish I knew.
ReplyDeleteI really like this it shows who you are ad how your life is. I wonder what it would be like if you wrote more. I wish i could have read more.
ReplyDeleteYour story was cute and made me smile! I liked how the character took that saying so serious!I wonder how old the child was. I wish you would have added a part in the night where she feels like bugs are all around her. Good job!:)
ReplyDeleteWow i think that this stroy was really nice and cute. I like how shes sprays on bug spray. It makes me wonder if that would actually protect her haha. I wish you had written more. Good Job :)
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