Close your eyes and count to ten,
he's never coming back again.
You wish everything would disappear,
he'll forget he loves you in about a year.
Close your eyes and forget for a while,
Stop showing them your meaningless smile.
And when everyone asks whats going wrong,
Lie like you've been doing all along.
Close your eyes and feel his skin,
Smell his clothes and love again.
Kiss his lips and hold his hand,
Make something of this love unplanned.
Never leave my side he cries,
You've counted to ten now open your eyes.
I really liked this. I liked how it said in the beginning to close your eyes and to open your eyes at the end. I wonder what the girl wanted because first she says to get over it and he'll forget her in a year but the she imagines the coming back together. I wish I would know if this was for one of our topics or if it was random.
ReplyDeleteI really loved your poem Mariah! I think this was your best writing ever. It was a well written poem and I loved it so much! :)
ReplyDeleteWow this is really good. I wonder what inspired this. I wish I could read it again and again and again and one more time after that. AWESOME JOB
ReplyDeleteI LOVE THIIIIIIIIIIIIS, SO MUCHHHHHH! (: incredible.
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